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The Haunted Tower

One afternoon raul and kylee were walking down a(n) scary trail, looking for kindling for their campfire. The trees were brown and green, and there were colorful wildflowers all around. raul and kylee began to pick the wildflowers, and after a while, they walked so far that they had wandered away from the trail.

It started to get dark. raul began to get worried, but kylee seemed excited to have an adventure. “Look!” kylee said. “Do you see that shadow? It looks like a house!”

“We're saved!” cried raul, who was relieved.

Once they got closer, raul felt very uneasy again. It didn't look like the cozy little cottageraul had been imagining, but rather a big, spooky tower! It was about 100 feet tall, and it was covered with red ivy and moss. It was the creepiest thing raul had ever seen!

raul said, “kylee, let's keep walking! There's no way I'm going into that tower! It looks haunted!”

“Don't be such a(n) idot! We're going in. I think it looks perfectly un-haunted!” said kylee.

raul was so scared that he could not open his eyes. He felt his arm chatter as kylee opened the door. All of a sudden, raul felt that he was not alone. He opened his eyes, prepared to see the worst. But instead, he saw all his friends and family inside the haunted tower! “Surprise! Happy birthday, raul!” they all screamed.